Michael Levitt's Tips For Writing
NIH Grants
(Copyright Michael Levitt, Oct
1989. Update Oct 1992, Mar 1996, Jun 2001, May 2004)
KEY ADVICE
- Think about your science in a broad scholarly
way. Read what others are doing, study their methods and implement them
for your self. Brainstorm widely and come up with that special idea. This
may seem like an obvious step, so obvious that I have just added it to
these notes, but it really is the most important.
GENERAL
- The reviewer has a huge load and has very little time
for each proposal. Make your work as clear and transparent as possible.
- Does the work have obvious
biomedical importance? Stress any connection to biology and medicine.
- Ask and answer these
questions before starting to write
- Are the aims clearly
stated?
- Are there significant
preliminary results?
- Has any previous
funding been well-used?
- Is there evidence that
the aims can be achieved?
- Have fewer aims but deal with
them in depth. Be focused on solving a problem.
- Go after a scientific problem
and bring in all the collaborators needed.
- Be sure to check the
literature very carefully. The 24 Study Section members know a great deal
more than you think they do.
- Use the template forms that
are available on the Web. Write using a Mac or PC and use a word-processor
for which there are templates (Microsoft Word).
FORMAT
- Have a "cartoon" figure that describes the
project in a simple picture. Remember you have 10 minutes before the panel
that votes on you!
- Use a clear, readable type of
12 characters/inch, 6 lines/inch (12 point).
- Use available space well and
eliminate any padding or cramming. A short, well-written, comprehensive
proposal is very appreciated.
- Use as few abbreviations as
possible and have a list of any abbreviation you must use.
- Have headings labeled A1, A2,
.. B1, B2.2, .. D1.1, D2, ... for easy reference. Make many sub-headings
that summarize the section. Use bold face.
- Include clear, relevant
figures and tables in text (not in Appendix) with self-explanatory
legends. Box these figure so that they stand out.
- Label the figures by the section
(e.g.. Fig. C2.1) which refers to them for easy cross-referencing. Placing figures in the text is tricky
with all versions of Microsoft Word but it is much easier if one sets the
format of the inserted picture object to have Layout Style “Square”.
- Refer to references by name
and date (e.g. Smith, 1988), so that the reviewer can instantly tell
whether you have the right references.
- Give titles of all papers in
bibliography.
- Consider using two columns
per page with right-justification as this is easier to read.
ABSTRACT
- Make the abstract very clear, easy to understand and
punchy.
- Ask specific questions and
show how you will answer them.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
- Have a detailed table of contents.
- List appendix material in
detail in section 3 of p.3, i.e. give paper references with title if there
is space.
BUDGET
- Do not expect funds for personnel that are "to
be named".
- Justify every budget item,
especially equipment and foreign travel. Use specific brand names and give
as many details as you can
- Avoid excessive supplies,
computer maintenance, computer time, etc.
- List all personnel involved,
even those not to be funded. List their positions and duties.
- It is very difficult to get
equipment in any year but the first.
- In a renewal, do not try to
get more than 10% more than your last year of funding (excluding
equipment).
BIOGRAPHY
- Mention
the names of your supervisors for Ph. D., postdoc, etc.
- Give all papers for
last three years plus relevant earlier publications. Try to show
recent productivity.
- Separate refereed papers
from book chapters. Start the list with the sentence "(selected
from 45 referenced and published)" to show your total output.
- Include papers that are
"in press" and "submitted".
OTHER SUPPORT
- List
items clearly with all questions answered very specifically.
- Be clear about your total %
effort being less than 100%.
- Have effort on each grant
between 15% and 30%.
- Avoid overlap, or if there is
overlap, carefully justify the need for a new proposal.
AIMS
- Make
the aims very specific and focused.
- Be clear and very easy to
follow.
- List strengths, potential
weak points and how you will deal with them.
SECTION B - BACKGROUND
- Show
a good appreciation of the literature. Try to survey the field uniformly.
You never know who will be on the Study Section.
SECTION C - PRELIMINARY RESULTS & PROGRESS REPORT
- Have
fresh preliminary results before writing the application.
- Publish during the previous
funding period (at least 2 paper/year).
- List papers published during
previous grant period prominently; specify overlap with other grants, if
any. Use boldface for the author or authors supported by the grant in the
publication.
- In a competitive renewal, be
very clear about which papers mention which grant. Be very clear about who
was supported by which grant.
- Summarize the results of
each paper. Be sure to add new results not yet published. Be very specific
about what result is in what paper.
- If this is a competitive
renewal, tabulate staff with dates of service and % effort . Give the
grant evaluation and priority score from the previous review. Indicate the
extent of requested funding that was actually granted to indicate that you
managed on less than needed.
SECTION D - EXPERIMENT DESIGN & METHODS
- Be
humble and self-critical.
- Do
not be overly ambitious.
- Limit the number of
projects. Be focused and realistic. If you list more than is possible then
the conclusion must be that you do not intend to do anything properly.
- Give evidence to support
anything that is unusual and imaginative.
- Do not make difficult things
seem too easy. Be realistic and convincing.
- Do not get into areas in
which you are not expert.
- Divide each subsection into:
"specific objectives"; "rationale"; "research
plan"; "expected significance".
- List the strengths of the
proposal.
- List possible pitfalls and
how you plan to deal with them. This is very important.
- Give a specific time-table.
OTHER
- Have
strong letters from any collaborators. The letters should not just be an generic endorsement.
- Check
spelling of names given in references. Show you care about the proposal
and you will be considered a careful scientist. Avoid careless errors as
these will be seen as indicative of sloppy science.
Copyright Michael Levitt. (updated
May 2004)